In summary....

A colleague recently asked me what I have learned from the writing of this paper. I found it to be a very interesting question. I have learned a number of things and I have reinforced a number of things that I thought I knew and now have the history and the scholarship to support that knowledge. A primary lesson in this has been the reinforcement that my job is to facilitate learning. It is not to be the “sage on the stage” and impart wisdom to the students. I have learned that I can add my voice to the process, yet my voice will help students find theirs. Dialogue is a critical component not just to higher education and adult learning theory but also to life itself. The practice of dialogue builds relationships and it is a critical art. Rhetoric as a tool can be useful. When information that is logistic or process oriented in nature, rhetoric is a necessary tool. The use of rhetoric in teaching what I do when teaching the Learning Assessment Seminars at DePaul University can be both dialogue and rhetoric; it is not bad to be both.

I think this is it for draft one!

Good lord, when did I start?!?!?

I cannot look at this anymore. I am too close to it. I have finished draft one and sent to MGJ for insights--all 32 pages. Well, 29 + bib. I even used some footnotes!

The last 2-3 pages seem anemic. That is because they are. I think I am missing some big holes but I cannot see them.

I also committed to my faculty thesis advisor that I would have a better draft to him by first of February. Guess I will!

Can it be?!?!

It is January 6th and I have one last section to write on my thesis. Well, two if you count the conclusion...{+ the part on metaphors}. I spent the past three days with a headache so I ended up working on it for about six hours today. Those two sections, clean up and cite some sources, expand on further questions this proposes, proof it myself, and voila. I will be ready to re-write it after getting input! (argh)

I have to be done with my first draft by the time classes start this week. If not, I think I will be doomed. I was thinking I was going to be laid off in late January/early February and have the gift of time in Feb/Mar to write this. It looks like that will not be likely now. Ergo, I HAD to be in movement on my paper. I am up to 31 pages. That is 10 pages up from just 2 weeks ago! Woohoo! If I proof by this weekend, I can get it to MGJ and VG for feedback. Then to my advisor and the re-writing can begin.

It seems to be never-ending but really, I just started working on writing it 5- 6 weeks ago.

I dream of the June cruise and reading crap novels!

I love this shot from our trip to Rockport, MA